Web Page Draft 2

Here is the second draft of our website. We have changed this from the first draft as we have looked over the checklist and added in some of the things that we had missed. Some of the parts that we have added are:

  • Missions statement
  • News section
  • A section with gifs of the band members
  • A link to iTunes on the digipak
  • A link to a ticket booking website on the tours section
  • Added the music video to the discography
  • Added a few more items to the shop
  • Made all the titles the same and more consistent

Click on the image to go to the website.

Screencastify From Teacher

After creating our second draft, our teacher gave us some feedback in the form of a screencastify to allow us to see what parts of our website should be improved upon. Here is the video we were given.

Targets For Improvement:

  • Think of mode of address in the ‘Who are we?’ section
  • Link the social media to our artist’s page rather than Wix
  • Add a track list onto discography page
  • Use VICE shirt logo on digipak with the devil tail

These targets are rather simple changes that we can easily do and we will focus on these for our final draft. Getting another person’s feedback for this website has been very useful as she was able to pick up on simple grammatical mistakes, like our mode of address, that we hadn’t noticed.

 

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