After making our first draft Mr Gregson gave us some feedback in order to help develop our video for our next draft. This feedback has been really helpful and allowed us to develop our video further. I decided from getting this feedback I wanted to write down what he said we can improve.
What I have to improve:
-more clear and better narrative
-more of a significance
-more of a variety of angles
-shots of both of us more
After receiving this feedback Sam and I will ensure to work on these improvements when we film again. I am very happy that Mr Gregson gave us feedback as it means we are able to see our work through someone else’s eyes. This was very helpful.