Pitch+Feedback

Shown above is out pitch for our music video, the slideshow shows the song we are using, the underlying themes, the narrative and performance,and Mis-en-scene. During our spoken pitch to our teacher we received 6 positive comments and 6 feedback comments. These included:

Positive

  • Interesting concept and narrative
  • Good use of setting
  • Narrative and performance are combined
  • Will show good editing skills
  • Well known band, but a not so much a popular song

Targets

  • Another actor or two could add more to the narrative
  • Need more detail on props that will be used
  • Mis-en-scene needs to be worked on more
  • Finalize choice of set
  • Good close up shots of the toys are needed to keep interest
  • Decide on costume design

From this feedback we will take the targets into consideration and address them, after reflecting we will finalize choice of set, costume design and mis-en-scene. We also need to think about developing the narrative more whether that be with adding a new actor or with detail such as props and ideas of angles. This will help when coming to filming and developing our music video.

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