Music Video Draft 4

What’s Changed:

  • We added more variety in the performance shots
  • We implemented a filter effect to further reflect the tone of the song and narrative
  • Jump cuts were added in flow with the beat of the song
  • We fully edited in the updated narrative shots
  • The cuts have been shortened to improve the pace


Peer Feedback:

Targets for Improvement:

  • Take out some of the jump cut edits
  • Improve the synchronization in some areas
  • Add more action in the narrative during the walking shots
  • Improve the edit making some of the long cuts shorter
  • Add some effects to make more visually appealing

Music Video Draft 3

What has changed?

  • The speed of the edit in correlation with the pace of the song.
  • Fixed lip synchronization
  • Long track shot has been cut up and spread throughout the video

Peer Feedback





  • Unclear narrative
  • Good pace of video in relation to music
  • Shaky camera in some shots
  • Unnecessarily out of focus in some shots
  • Repetitive use of performance shots

Targets for Improvement

  • Make the narrative clear in the re-shoot
  • Add more variety in performance
  • Better control of the focus and depth of field in re-shoot
  • Use a tripod in all stages
  • Make use of shot reverse shots

Shoot Evaluation (Narrative)


Overall, I am happy with the footage we got from the shoot. We made good use of the framing and composition we have learnt throughout the year, and I am happy with the framing of the shots as they we made use of leading lines creating a sense of claustrophobia for the character and the rule of thirds to convey his isolation. However, apart from the ideas we used for the shoot, the lighting and some other problems we didn’t anticipate beforehand affected our shoot in a bad way. From this I hope to do a retake of the shoot and use what went well in the new one and erase what went wrong.

Our Targets

From the shoot, I wanted to follow our storyboard as best we could and to get good footage that captured the vision we had for the video and reflected its themes clearly. We also wanted to make sure that we got the best quality footage.


Audience Ideologies

This is a slide of an example Dating Profile for my Audience’s Ideology.

We gathered information from YouGov to use as a template to create our Dating Profile.

This is a document we made using screenshots from the YouGov site about our type of audience. This told us about their social class, what type of media they are into, and their age.


Music Video Draft 2 Includes Narrative

Self Assessment

I believe we were able to construct a good sequence and were successful in merging the narrative and performance in order to offer a strong balance of the two. We were able to use variety of the different shots.

Targets for Improvement

  • Clean up the narrative footage by re filming most of the parts
  • Add movements and zooms for performance on Premiere to make it visually appealing
  • Alter the colour and saturation of there video to reflect the tone of the song
  • Make the cuts quicker and try to link the cuts to the rhythm.

Shoot Reflection (Performance)

I am really happy with the results from the performance shoot. We managed to record the shots we needed and were able to get a range of different camera angles and distances. We made good use of the cinematography that we have learnt throughout the year, which allowed us to communicate meaning through the composition in order to reflect the themes of the narrative. The location I chose is excellent as it gave us the opportunity to make the framing visually appealing and interesting, such as the leading lines of the pillars that break up the frame. The use of rule of thirds to communicate isolation and loneliness in correlation with the narrative themes is good.