A New Improved Front Page

This is the 2nd draft of my cover page for my pop music magazine. I have edited parts of my cover according to the feedback that I received in a previous post; for example; I have moved the gradient from the bottom-left corner of the page to make the cover lines easier to read, I also changed the font of the second line of my main cover line from bold to regular so that it is no longer difficult to read.

I played around with Photoshop and I removed the white that was around my models hair in the previous draft, This was one of my main targets to improve my front cover draft. I tried to remove the shadow on my models face, but found it was not possible because the shadow is on the actual photo.

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