This is the 3rd draft of our music video. Since our 2nd draft we have taken on the feedback that our teacher has given us.
Below is a screenshot of the feedback that our peers have given us on our draft 3. It was important to gain this feedback on our draft 3 because it gives us an insight into what other people think of our video instead of only changing elements of the video due to what my group likes/dislikes.
Since receiving this feedback from our peers my group has come up with the following targets:
- Some shots are slightly out of focus – possibly try to re-shoot these
- Lip syncing is slightly out on some shots – try to correct this
- Add more post production – possibly some extra lens flares, possibly some colour correction filters to add more of a cold tone to the video
- Use more of a variety of shots
- Some performance shots seem a bit awkward – close-up shots appear stronger in terms of this.