Mrs. cobbs feedback for front cover-
- Make the title bigger as its to skinny, it will help it stand out
- Add a price to the front cover
- Add more cover lines to make it more busy
- change the cover line ‘unheard songs’ to relate to an artist
- Try a different color border at the bottom for example pink or white
Mrs. cobbs feedback for contents page-
- Fix the spacings between text to make sure its all even and make sure text doesn’t overlap
- Add a page number in the corner
- Make the numbers on the strip bolder
Mrs. cobbs feedback for double page spread-
- Add a different photo in the box maybe one of her face or something different?
- Caption the picture in the box
- Make the article writing wrap around her
- Check spellings in the article as well as making sure it ends with ‘continued on next page’