Mrs. cobbs feedback for front cover-

• Make the title bigger as its to skinny, it will help it stand out
• Add a price to the front cover
• Add more cover lines to make it more busy
• change the cover line ‘unheard songs’ to relate to an artist
• Try a different color border at the bottom for example pink or white

Mrs. cobbs feedback for contents page-

• Fix the spacings between text to make sure its all even and make sure text doesn’t overlap
• Add a page number in the corner
• Make the numbers on the strip bolder

 

 

Mrs. cobbs feedback for double page spread-

• Add a different photo in the box maybe one of her face or something different?
• Caption the picture in the box
• Make the article writing wrap around her
• Check spellings in the article as well as making sure it ends with ‘continued on next page’