This is the forth draft of our music video, and likely the final edit we will be making. Having used comments from students and staff, and upon review of draft 3 we have made some small changes to the video.
- We have included some more shots from our narrative shoots, the increase variety with in the video.
- Changes have been made to certain clips, to shorten them and make sure that the fit within the video.
- Some edits have been altered, moving to the end of words or sentences to give a more professional finish to the product.
- Additionally we have started to experiment with a VHS filter, on shots from our narrative shoot, for this edit we have increased the noise to 50% and will be looking at how to add a timecode into these clips to make the authentic VHS look.
Peer Feedback is an important part of the development of all of the media products we have produced throughout the course. Below is a video we filmed with some of our peers reacting to our 4th draft of the music video. Presenting the comments in this was allows for us to have more detailed comments and to talk about the improvements together as we watch the video.
Our main target for the next draft, will be to edit the VHS look and apply the timecode to each narrative section, as this will finish the look we are looking for. Similarly it will help to establish the contemporary R&B genre that our video fits.