Above I have displayed the second draft of my double page speed that I am going to include in my music magazine.  Since my second draft I have since changed the image that is located on the first page in the magazine spread, this change was due to my peers agreeing that I should swap my old image with the one shown above due to the colours matching the rest of the spread. I have also created a new text layout that involves the artists quote being displayed at the bottom of the image with a headline piece of text showing what was happening in the image and where it was located.  I have used a full page to show an image that I took of an upcoming artist during a worldwide live stream festival set. I have titled this image with the cover line “Jelly Baby live at the castle” so that my target audience can quickly work out what pages contain what so they can quickly find a specific page. I have listed below a list of improvements that I could make that have been suggested by one of my peers that I will be using when creating my third and final draft.

My Targets for my 3rd draft:

• Make the quote smaller
• Choose a more exciting font for the main cover line and look at line spacing and move it off his head.
• Drop capital where the article starts.
• Smaller font as you can get more of the article in.
• One column is justified and the other not.
• Electro logo in the appropriate colour and font.