After completing the second draft of my artist social media page, I asked my mentor to review my work and give me key improvements that would improve the overall out come of my work.

Here is the feedback that I received:

The key improvements that my mentor mentioned where:

•         To add three more posts.
•         To reply to all audience comments to keep them engaged.
•         To include advertisement on platforms such as radio or tv.
•         To include another animation or gif to advertise merchandise.
• To separate two most recent posts to avoid similarity of the                       fans avoiding reviewing post.
• To include all digipak covers.

Overall after reviewing the key improvements that my mentor has made  I have listed all of these improvement that I need to make to improve the overall appearance of my artist social media page as this would help to increase my audience engagement with my artists page.