This is the second draft of my Contents page:

What I have changed:

• I have used different photos of my models to have more of a connection with the audience
• I have added a red cross in the middle to make the page more interesting and spark emotion
• I have put the writing to the sides of the cross for the audience to know whats going on
• I have used blue and green text boxes and faded the colours out for interest and feeling since colours are very important to correlate to emotions in R&B
• I have changed the font of the title

What next?

• I want to edit my models photos to make them less simple
• For my top model I want to go back to my pinterest board and use a RBG colour scheme on her
• I want to move the title of my contents page around
• I want to change the colour of my page number
• I would like to edit my bottom model so she looks more dramatic

Targets:

• To go back to my pinterest board and get ideas
• To edit my top model and give her different colours
• To experiment with different sizes of the pictures
• To change the colour of my page number
• To move the title of my contents page around
• To edit my bottom model to look more dramatic

Peer assessment: