This is the Complete Magazine Draft:

What went well:

• got barcode and price (front page)
• good photos (all pages)
• logos (front page)
• font (all pages)
• editing (contents page and DPS)
• layout (all pages)
• colour gradients (contents page)
• photography bi (DPS)

Even better if:

• use a different font for my contents page
• unstrech my Main Cover Star
• Say what BD means (front page)
• Explain who ABE is (front page)
• Explain what is INDSIDE (front page)
• Move my pug (front page)
• Shorten cover lines (front page)
• Explain Logos (front page)
• don’t over use font (contents page)
• dont over edit photos (contents page)
• page numbers bigger (contents page)
• put contents to pictures
• un pop the eyes of my model on the DPS