Positive Feedback:

• Loved our locations
• Good Costume design
• Nice imagery
• Simple story line
• Performance is sorted well and is neutral
• Much thought has gone into the pitch

Targets:

• Take pictures of the places
• Make sure you have enough lighting
• Get on more place to film
• Make sure you have the actors prepared
• Choose places that are essential to your plot
• Actions must all be the same, make sure the audience can notice they are different