Summary:

• play with effects and transitions to create more interest on screen
• include more close up and extreme close up shots to create intensity
• move the star so that she isn’t in the centre of the screen the whole time
• use close ups of hands and arms to distract from the out of time dancing
• more cuts between shots  some shots are too long
• use effects 3 times
• make sure sequencing is chronological – some doesn’t make sense
• create jump cuts for interest

Targets:

• add in more effects and ensure that they are in at least 3 times for the comfort of the audience
• use more shots and angles – some are too long and the interest is lost
• include more close up shots of hand movements and include movement through the frame
• include some more obvious jump cuts
• adapt the pace of edit to fit the tension in the frame