Feedback From Teacher
This is the feedback we were given back to our group. We had quite a few positive feedback but we do have a lot improvements to consider.
- Edit works well.
- The rhythm is good.
- Good variety of shots.
- Include more close-ups of main singer.
- Make the relationship between Olivia and the 2 guys more clear.
- Establish that the guys are in competition for Olivia.
- Put the narrative shots in order so it doesn’t confuse the audience.
- Improve the structure.
- Add in shot reverse shot of the guy looking jealous.
- Introduce Jordan earlier.
- Maybe cast someone else instead of using the main singer.
- Shots of Seb’s reactions to Jordan and Olivia.
- Make narrative simpler.
- Maybe just stick to one relationship.