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Feedback on article

Here is my article I have written about my star Laura Scott, the article is going to be placed on the double page spread of my magazine:

 

Amongst our peers in the class we have read one another so we can reflect on areas which do not sound right and any missing punctuation. We then gave feedback which helped us to improve our articles.

 

From the feedback given my targets to improve the punctuation in this and just make sure I read through checking all spelling errors.

 

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