Here is a screencastify from my teacher in responce to improvements and feedback of my music video draft 2. Below I have listed the improvements that she has given us t make our music video better.
- The music video goes well with the rhythm and flows to the beat
- Wide variety of shots
- Editing works well together
- More close-ups of the star
- Improve the structure (put all the clips of a certain location together)
- Add in shot revise shot of the guy looking jealous and envy the relationship
- Make the relationship between Olivia and the two guys clearer
- Put the narrative shots in order otherwise it will confuse audience
- Establish that the guys are in competition for Olivia
- Introduce Jordan earlier
- Make the narrative simpler
- Stick to one relationship to make it easier?
- Cast someone else instead of using the main singer?
- shot os Seb’s reaction to Jordan and Olivia