January 15

Pans labyrinth final essay feedback

I feel my essay went well and explores some good themes and ideas throughout but if I was to do it again I would place a bigger focus on the punctuation used as sometimes it can make a simple sentence needlessly complicated. I would also explore the ideas brought up in greater detail. Overall i feel the essay was a success and i do like void of the issues that come with it.

October 14

Narrative Analysis of a Up (Docter) 2009

The image here depicts a 5 act story being told, the a=example i used was the 2009 pixar film up. i thought up was a good example as it has a very simple story to understand and is well recognized. A stranded five act story would start with establishing the world, time and relationships in this case the world is the US the time ranges from the 60,s till present (2009)  and the opening explains the relationship between Carl and his wife before she tragically dies. Act two usually consists of the catalyst that sends the characters on some sort of adventure in this instance its a combination a unknown company trying to buy Carl’s house and the fear he will die not having seen the Niagara falls so in a last effort he decides to take the plunge and fly his house there and unknowing takes a boy scout with him by the name of Russel. Act three is when the conflict is introduced into the story giving the characters stakes and keeping the audiences attention grabbed in this case the conflict in this film the kidnapping of Russel the boy scout as Carl has no option but to carry on flying there however morally reprehensible. Act four consists of the protagonists gaining some advantage that could help in there effort in this case that would be Carl and Russel coming across Kevin the bird and Doug the dog. Finally act 5 is the climax in witch the protagonists defeat the antagonists and in this case its the team being chased of the island by adventurer Charles muntz, its not always the case but usually in act five the characters come back to there previous situation having learned something for instance Carl in end learns his humanity.