Pan’s Labyrinth Final Essay Feedback

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQT3lvvhTlZcglSm0ReHfaAnIQSkcQsfxOTPoSviGN-iK-xMAZ6KdVae-cxdXDP3CqJpTYCaTJ9Xg-f/pub

(Link to final Pan’s Labyrinth Essay)

Targets:

-Use more technical terms such as “proxemics”

-Develop my use of words, with a variety of words and adjectives. Try to not use the word show but connotes and or symbolises to vary my work as well as develop my description and suggestions to the context of the film. 

-Use more film keywords to describe micro and macro features.