This is our Draft 4. We have discussed all the feedback we received and altered what we thought was appropriate and made changes we thought would make our video even better. We added in some transitions, re-shot some performance scenes, and sped up the pace of the edit. This has had an overall positive effect on our video and we are more than happy with what we have achieved.
As a part of this project, we have to get live feedback from peers as well, so below I have filmed a classmate – Bilal – giving us feedback and commenting on our video.
Targets for Improvement:
- Make the ending more remember able, maybe add some big glitch to make it really stand out
- Make more distinctive glitches at the end to fit the pace consistently
- Maybe more enthusiasm from the rapper…