These are the images for our first draft of the digipak. For some reason we couldn’t export the full template from Indesign, but the images are the appropriate size to the digipak sizes.
This above is a screencasitfy feedback from our Teacher. She has made some valid points that we need to improve in order to achieve a much better product, not that this one is bad but these improvements will take us to the next level. Overall, the product links quite well and the images are of high quality and the shots are varied enough, but the points she made will elevate our grade even more.
The Front Cover:
- Arch the red smoke
- Add the album name
- Emphasise the broken lamp more
- The illumination is too intense
- Distort a little bit more to make continuity sense with the other graphic
The Back Cover:
- Change font
- Spelling mistakes
- Put a filter on
- Copyright stuff
- Experiment with some white or red smoke at the top of the image
- Bring a red ‘X’ to the last page as well
Some other parts of general feedback were that we should make general continuity sense a bit more obvious, so put a red filter on the back cover and distort the eye graphic more / reduce the illumination on the light bulb graphic.
Besides that, we are well onward with a great draft of our digipak. I feel confident we can make these changes happen in a couple of lessons, maybe get some final feedback and then move on to importing it into our website which is also well on its way to a first draft.