Here is the third draft of our music video. Since draft 2 we have done another narrative photo shoot and inserted the footage into the video. We have also started to edit the story line so that it made more narrative sense.
We asked some of our peers to review our video and here are their comments:
From these comments and our own ideas we have come up with a list of things that need to be improved
- Do some more pick up shots of the match to make the symbolism more clear
- Add more fast paced cuts to match with the tempo of the song
- Get rid of some shots that do not work and replace them with something that fits the narrative better
- Make sure our narrative is more concrete