Music Video Draft 3

Above I have inserted our third draft, we have now put together more shots, and now have the shots from our third shoot which was a big success allowing us t0 progress a lot with the video and put into action our editing ideas for the chorus in place. We have also developed skills and put in effects on our shots to make them appear darker. We have received peer feedback in the youtube comments on this video and I have put them in below:

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Looking at these I can develop some targets as well as seeing what went well.


  • More close ups
  • re-shoot out of focus shots
  • more narrative shots


  • editing to the beat
  • narrative shots and theme
  • effects over shots

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