Here is our penultimate draft for our music video in which we have applied previous feedback and targets to work towards the final product. Below is some feedback on this draft which will help us really refine and our work. With our fourth draft we have applied the Youtube comments feedback to our work and tried to develop if further with those targets in mind.
We have two sets of feedback for this draft, the above is teacher feedback from Mr Gregson which is a much more analytical and technical point of view, and below is feedback from on of our peers, Carney, which is more of a ‘target audience’ type of response as she leans more towards picking out what she enjoy or techniques work for the genre rather than from a course work criteria perspective.
After reviewing all of this feedback we can conclude some targets to refine and perfect our final draft;
TARGETS:
– finish the section at the end
– keep color editing consistent
– Edit sea shots to be less grey, push the colors in the blood shots by increasing the contrast.
– adjust timing of the chorus cuts and cut in further to the shot after.
Overall there has been good progress over the drafts, it is now time to refine and make the last adjustments to assure the video flows and keeps on brand.
Below is our final draft where we have perfected and applied our targets, I am pleased with the turn out and look forward to developing these ideas further with different types of media.
What We Changed:
– Finished our final shot sequence
– Made our color editing consistent and relevant to the shot
– Corrected chorus timing to match the beat
To conclude, I feel the music video is now complete and I am happy with the outcome. I feel that e had strong and consistent themes which means they will be easier to relate to as we move into designing our artists brand through a DigiPak and a website.