This is my Montage, of a typical school day.
To improve, I would:
- Get more match on action shots
- Get more closeups and long shots rather than just mid-shots
What I liked was:
- The order being chronological, shows her entering school to leaving school with a friend
- The transitions I’ve used have shown a passing of time well
- Rules have been used, e.g. the Rule of thirds, and lead space for example.
This is the storyboard of shots we wanted: