I drafted my double-page spread. Here is a voice recording of my first article :

I reflected on my voice recording and provided myself with some targets for my next draft:

  • Make sure punctuation are in the correct places.
  • Changing some words to fit the sentence better.
  • Check over the structure of my sentences.

Reflecting on these targets, I have created my second draft of my article.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My teacher provided me with the target to add more detail and juicy gossip, so that the readers feel they are learning something new. Which I will now develop as my draft 3.