Reflecting on my First Draft of my Double Page Spread I have received feedback.

Feedback from my peers include :

  • Add lyrics
  • Add more graphic design
  • Make the typeface for the questions clearer

Feedback from my teacher included :

  • Adding a banner with a bright colour to go alongside the text
  • Add Quotes
  • Add by lines

Targets for development:

I have already added features such as changing the opacity of a banner and making mini pictures in a Polaroid form to give an insight to Amy’s personality. I also added different typefaces and sizes and spacing to make the text stand out easily on the page.

My next step is taking on board these comments by adding a banner and making sure all necessary features are there such as page numbers.  I will also add more exciting quotes and lyrics to make the article more personal and exciting.