Reflecting on my First Draft of my Double Page Spread I have received feedback.
Feedback from my peers include :
- Add lyrics
- Add more graphic design
- Make the typeface for the questions clearer
Feedback from my teacher included :
- Adding a banner with a bright colour to go alongside the text
- Add Quotes
- Add by lines
Targets for development:
I have already added features such as changing the opacity of a banner and making mini pictures in a Polaroid form to give an insight to Amy’s personality. I also added different typefaces and sizes and spacing to make the text stand out easily on the page.
My next step is taking on board these comments by adding a banner and making sure all necessary features are there such as page numbers. I will also add more exciting quotes and lyrics to make the article more personal and exciting.
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