Below is my Draft 3 video – 

The things that have changed since our Draft 2 include:

  • Going over the lip-syncing to fit the song better
  • Looking at clips to make sure they are on the beat
  • Positioning and scale to zoom in shots to fit the space
  • Getting rid of the existing transition that didn’t quite fit the style of video
  • Playing with the colour – black and white for narrative until our model realizes he is good enough
  • Shortening clips, such as the wraps before the fight and including more montage

5x YouTube Comments from Peers / Audience

The feedback from peers on our YouTube comments helps us as media producers to be able to get impartial audience comments and so we can make improvements. 

Targets for improvement: 

  • Add more colour to performance clips
  • Look at adding more effects
  • Check Lip-syncing again
  • Looking back on our video there is one clip of our narrative not in black and white nearer the start (0:32)