draft 2 feedback and targets

After completing our second draft we delved into gaining valuable insight from our teachers and classmates on how to ever-improve our music video. We filmed this video interviewing people on what they liked as well as offering alternatives to problems they identified. The video can be viewed below.

Targets:

• Re-shoot clips which are out of focus
• include more narrative shots to make it less confusing for the audience, this will also improve the videos continuity
• Some lip-synicng still needs to be improved
• The opening clips need to  an increased pace to get to the bass to make it match up with the song
• Add special effects to emphasise the instrumental parts of the song such as musical notes and an animated kiss
• Improve the energy of singing at the beginning of the song