Draft 3 feedback and targets

As a group we sought to gain feedback from our classmates and peers through the use of a questionnaire to see what works and what doesn’t for our music video. Below are the forms we collected.

What went well:

• Jack enjoyed the political themes in our video finding the narrative to be thought-provoking and unpredictable. He also thought the setting was appropriate.
• Sally believed some shaky camera shots actually work well for our narrative and performance. She also made positive references to our title design and she thinks our stylized shot transitions work well with the song and the genre.
• Tom thought that our video is fun and is full of energy which is aided by our use of quick whip pans in the opening instrumental of the song.
• Louis thought that the level of editing done in after effects supplemented both the narrative and the performance very well.

Targets:

• Allow a longer time for the newsreel to be read both at the start and on the celebrity vanity sequence.
• Fix lip-syncing in some areas.
• Add more animations similar to the lips and the musical notes to heighten the performance side of the video.