draft 1 feedback and targets

Using written feedback forms, we asked members of our class to evaluate the first draft of our advert. You can view our feedback forms below.

What went well:

• Overall the mise-en-scene was found to be popular and reflects the ideals of the genre well such as the distinct iconography found in our costume and the Vespa prop.
• The use of colours on the band and the review stars is effective and catches the eye of the consumers.
• The advert is fun and energetic.
• ICT has been skillfully.
• Some found the image to be too cluttered which may distract consumers attention.

Targets:

• Make the “out now” marking clearer perhaps with a bolder font and a black outline.
• Some did not like the black highlight behind pieces of text, we will reduce the intensity so it blends in better to the background image.
• We will also include the record label logo.