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The image above is my first draft of my magazine ‘Buzz’ I asked one of my peers to examine the front cover and give me some feedback on how I can improve my poster and make it better. Overall she likes the colour scheme I am going for. However she felt as if my model was distorted, however she is unable to identify why it doesn’t look correct. Personally I do agree with the comments and feedback she gave and will be taking this information into consideration when producing my next draft of my magazine cover. This information is crucial as this will allow myself to progress and produce a better front page cover. In addition to that my peer noticed a little white spec on top of my model, during Photoshop I will ensure to have removed any excess background.