December
18
Feedback & Reflection on Draft DPS
I have asked my one of my peers and my teacher to conduct some feedback for me on how I am able to improve my double page spread they have said the following:
Miss Cobb:
- Create a Logo for ‘Double A’
- Make a name for the photographer
- Make the second and third paragraph not bold
- Crop the image even more as it is uneven at the moment
Amy Grief:
- Make sure some texts are un-bold as it is difficult to read
- Move Double A up as it just on the line
- Move ‘Amelia and Amber’ and ‘Double A’ to the other side as the other side is very bare
- Move the questions down more and the covering the bottom of the image