December 18

Feedback & Reflection on Draft DPS

I have asked my one of my peers and my teacher to conduct some feedback for me on how I am able to improve my double page spread they have said the following:

Miss Cobb:

  • Create a Logo for ‘Double A’
  • Make a name for the photographer
  • Make the second and third paragraph not bold
  • Crop the image even more as it is uneven at the moment

Amy Grief:

  • Make sure some texts are un-bold as it is difficult to read
  •  Move Double A up as it just on the line
  • Move ‘Amelia and Amber’ and ‘Double A’ to the other side as the other side is very bare
  • Move the questions down more and the covering the bottom of the image

 


Posted 18th December 2019 by laurenbaker in category Component 1, Music Magazine

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