Targets for development? What’s new and what’s next?

I have asked my one of my peers and my teacher to conduct some feedback for me on how I am able to improve my double page spread they have said the following:

• Create a Logo for ‘Double A’
• Make a name for the photographer
• Make the second and third paragraph not bold
• Crop the image even more as it is uneven at the moment
• Move Double A up as it just on the line
• Move ‘Amelia and Amber’ and ‘Double A’ to the other side as the other side is very bare

My Targets:

• Make sure my second and third paragraph aren’t in bold.
• Design a logo for ‘Double A’
• Make up a name for the photographer
• Fill the white gap in
• Change where the quote goes

How will I do this?:

I will take on board my corrections and ensure to play around and listen to the feedback I have been given by my peer and teacher. As this information is critical for me, as this will allow me to create the best possible double page spread. Using my skills on Photoshop and Indesign I will create a logo for ‘Double A’ as this is bring a new flare of something different to my double page spread.