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Below is the screen cast that my teacher has produced giving me feedback as to how I can make my music magazine better.

My teacher has given me feedback using screen cast, overall she is impressed with the quality of my work and can see I have put a lot of time and effort into producing my music magazine.

Here is a summary of what she said:

• I need to add some more colours into my theme, as it is very simple at the moment.
• Make sure all of the social handles are the same way
• Add a catchy headlines underneath my photo of Amelia and Amber to attract my target audience
• Make sure all of line spacing is correct in the Double Page Spread
• There is the same house style throughout
• The use of blue is overused
• Move the plug and masthead up
• In the content page, to attract the reader make some of the key words bold, like ‘Little Mix’ and ‘Underrated Artists.’