In order for me to make my music magazine a success, I have obtained some final feedback on my front page, double page spread and my content page from my teacher. This will tell me what I need to do in order for me to make my music magazine a success for my target audience. Below is the feedback given to me by my teacher:

Final Teacher Feedback:

Front Page Feedback:

• Add graphics on the pug as it is very plain
• Plug – overlap it onto the masthead a little more
• Cover line- ‘Tommy tells all!’ shift so its underneath the main cover line ‘Tommy’
• Change the word ‘Featuring’ from Blue to white

Double Page Spread Feedback:

• Check column size widths
• Check alignment of columns
• Change the black opaque banner for a red opaque banner (The cover line banner)
• Make Amelia and Amber bigger
• Try having the questions in upper case

Content Page Feedback:

• Double check font size
• Check spelling ‘split’ not ‘spilt’
• Width of white outline
• Blake’s Big Break should be on two seperate lines
• Amelia and Amber move to the white empty space