Music Video Draft 3

Music Video Draft 3

Comments from peers:

Targets for improvement:

  • Add in more close ups
  • Some of the lip syncing is out of sync
  • Clips are over used, add in more clips so isn’t as much repetition
  • Stabilise some of the clips so shots are more stable
  • In the argument looks like Chloe is smiling, refill clip as doesn’t connote the appropriate MES
  • Need more close ups in the fight, to show more emotion
  • Fill in blank spaces with clips
  • Need to change the order of the clips at love shack, as doesn’t make sense.
  • Change the transition at 1.16 as doesn’t fit in with video
  • Get rid of clips of Olly homeless


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