Draft 4 Feedback and targets

Front cover

• Title bolder
• ‘One of the biggest KPOP (make it bigger – different font) magazines – bring together
• Bring plus closer and different colour
• Add peachy orange to front cover
• Free limited poster on an angle – look more like a pug
• Move bottom black writing down a little bit
• Move bar code right a bit and smaller
• Don’t put a specific date e.g November 2017
• Eve bigger
• Couple more cover lines – writing in black (it’s poppy so it’s meant to be exciting)

Contents page

• Editors note – put best wishes, your editor, Lydia (in a box like pink box with numbers)
• Put more little hearts somewhere
• Bring in another colour
• Cover lines clash with ‘in this edition we have all the latest news
• Pink box could be made longer

Double page spread

• Background taken down a notch
• Blank space above the title – put in an extra photo
• Eve bigger