Draft 4 Feedback and Targets

Targets:

Cover-

  • Add inserts to cover, or cover lines
  • Smaller price
  • Anchor main cover line to the main cover star.
  • Bigger mast head, condense letters down

Contents Page-

  • Add texture to background
  • Change the females model’s eye line
  • More page numbers and detail on what can be found
  • 2017 Disco? Be more specific

 

Double Page Spread-

  • Need two page numbers
  • Add a buy line
  • Add another insert
  • Anchor a quote or caption to the main star
  • Made white background pop more
  • Feature the ‘DISCOTEK’ mast head
  • Rearrange columns

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