After receiving feedback from some of our peers, we have made some tweaks to our video. We have finally added in the doodle effect that we have been practicing to some of our shots however we are still to add more doodles throughout. By adding the drawings we have emphasised parts of the narrative that we believe are important. To understand what people like and what further improvements need to be made, we asked one of our peers to watch and record her feedback of our music video.
Overall there were many positives however there were some points for improvement.
Positives-
- The drawings make some of the narrative clearer now
- The outlines at the beginning are cool
- The continuity of both characters jumping on the beat
- The energy in the performance was good
- All round steady shots
- Variety in shots
- Use of lyrics to make drawings is cool
- Slow mo shots fit the ending
Negatives-
- Some of the lip syncing is still slightly out
- More close ups would help the audience to better connect with the star