This is our second draft, including the narrative of the music video rather than just the performance.
Jordan and I both contributed to the filming, editing and discussing it so the narrative looked just as we had hoped. Jordan and I decided that the narrative was slightly challenging to understand, so we will order it so it is clear to the audience.
When we do draft 3, we will aim to:
- Put in more effects to make it pop, rather than to leave it how it is, as it may get repetitive over time.
- Change the order of the narrative so it is easier to understand, whilst leaving it relatively anachronic
- Link the changes in music to the changes in the video so the visuals work into the music, so it looks professional
Some of the shots also have a black border around them, which we will be able to fix in production.