Draft of Front Page

DRAFT 1

FEEDBACK

1. Smooth the shape of blue placed behind the image to make a perfect curve around him.

2. Make the name “Parker” bigger

3. Add a drop shadow to the title

4. Move the text “Parker Nicce, the new Sam Smith over to see it clearer.

MY ASSESSMENT

In my opinion, my magazine cover stands out against other magazines because of the bold, blue text. I really like the coloured shape behind my photo, as it gives my poster a very retro vibe. I feel as if it also throws the theme of jazz in your face and makes it very clear to what music genre it is.

What I think I will improve on is maybe make my masthead a bit bigger and make the small box saying “NEW ALBUM” bigger, to fit the size of the first line below it. I may also change the colour of my smaller text to link in with the masthead.

 

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