For this new improved DPS I changed the following:
I added a pink (slightly transparent) background for the text to make it more legible.
I added page numbers and credits for article and photos.
I added a cross through the word Rivals to emphasise that they are no longer in competition with each other.
I made the stand first shorter and gave it a different font.
I changed these aspects to my double page spread due to the feedback given to me from my peers and teachers. This was constructive criticism which I think improved my DPS a lot.