Feedback

The writing is over the image of the directors, therefore it is unreadable. Not all the writing needs to be on the double-page spread, the red might be difficult for some readers. The main issue is that there is too much writing on the page making it very overwhelming to look at.

Targets

• Cut down the text on the page
• Change the red colour of the subtitle paragraphs
• Add more images within the article
• Stagger the text so that it looks more interesting
• Give more effects to the quotes so they stand out
• Make the font bigger so it is easier to read

What’s next?

I will change the colour of the sub-article texts and change the article so that it travels onto the next page. I will make many improvements to the article so that it is easier to read for everyone and looks much more effective, I might add some more effects into the background to make it look more interesting and will cut down the text so that they contrast giving a more effective look and appearance.