Final Pitch

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Positives

• has a good narrative
• simple and effective
• relates to the target audience
• a powerful video idea
• dark tones from lighter tones
• developed and interesting narrative
• idea of shots is good
• idea of production plan is good

Targets

• add a stronger sense of symbolism
• categorize it into a thriller of obsession
• make it more relatable to the audience
• bigger sense of obsession
• reflect how people are blind to reality
• images of facial features to connote virtual image
• develop the narrative
• keep audience demographic in mind