Teacher Feedback and Final Targets
In evaluation of this feedback from my teacher.
Technical Production Skills:
- There are only 3 images so far, there must be more than 3, so it is very important that I add another one.
- Main star on the front cover needs to be feathered in photoshop as the edges are too rough.
- Main cover line layout needs to be changed, this will make it clearer and more interesting as a page.
- The contents page should include the colour yellow to match the yellow on the hat of the star.
- On the front cover or contents page there should be a caption from my female star.
In terms of level of skill:
Looks like a magazine: In between level 4 and 3
Mise en scene in the photos communicate genre: In between level 4 and 3
Layout and Page design is engaging: Level 3