Here is a screen castify I received by two peers in my class, they watched our music video and have recorded their ideas and thoughts on how to improve our music video, however not all the feedback was negative, they gave us some compliments on some of out shots and framing and really liked our MISE-EN-SCENE.
-Double check some of the editing as it doesn’t match up with next shots.
-Add some effects in
-Try and create a clearer narrative on why they are aruging
-Get rid of one of the water pouring shots as it is there twice
We are pleased with the feedback received and we will all try hard to improve on the points they brought up and we are taking into account their opinions.