Feedback and Reflection on Draft 3



  • “I like the images, I like how they stand out from the background and text, and vice versa”
  • “I quite like the layout as well, although its simple its easy to understand, and straight forward”
  • “For improvement, maybe fade the images into the background”
  • “I really like your background, and the colours of the text, and font, that’s really nice”
  • “Maybe add some static look to the top right, and stylize it. The mise en scene looks right out of a film, so capitalize on it.”
  • “It would be good to give a stand-first, drop capital, byline, photographer credited, some page numbers and maybe more paragraphs”

This feedback was given to me by two peers, and a teacher.


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