Complete Magazine Draft

My Complete Music Magazine Draft:

My Teachers Feedback:

Improvements I need to make:

Front Page:

• Fix Masthead from changing when exported into Google Drive.
• Some empty space above and below the ‘Exclusive Tyler Q’ part.
• ‘Tyler Q’ could stand out more from the rest of the text (could be achieved with the use of effects and colours.)

Contents Page:

• Could possibly add some white to the page.
• Need more than 6 articles on there.
• Black clothes from Jacob and Tyler on the black background needs to change, (could be achieved by using glow effects or strokes).

Double Page Spread (DPS):

• Must write my article urgently. (No.1 Priority).
• Could widen my columns.
• Page Numbers.
• Must make my pull quote smaller than my headline.