December 13

Draft 2 – The Contents Page

This is my first draft of my contents page, this should include:

  • page numbers,
  • photos,
  • brief catchy lines,
  • main stories in bigger boxes,
  • lots of colour.

Positive Feedback:

  • nice use of colours,
  • appealing box shape,
  • nice layout.


  • Smaller contents title,
  • change the font on the right hand side,
  • shorter titles
  • add an editors note

This is my new and improved version of my contents page. I have made added an editors note to convince my target audience to carry reading my magazine after page 20, made one of my pictures smaller along with my contents title and have moved my side photos upwards so I could add another brief plug. I also added a page number to help my reader navigate their way around my magazine easier. I think I have improved my contents page a lot.

Posted 13th December 2017 by scarlettplampton in category Music Magazine

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